it is hard to stop
when you’re running a race
a marathon, if you will
it’s like an endless chase
there is no end in sight
and perhaps none exists
but every once in a while
you’ll feel yours within your reach
you will separate yourself
from the reality that you live in
isolation is convenience
numb is the only feeling
you will strive for success
that you’ll never truly savour
when you want it,
it shines like diamonds
once you achieve it,
it’s a mere graphite rock
we are made to believe that
this is a part of life
but never once
taught to question
if there is any respite
– living
22-05-19
Image: I saw this gorgeous painting at the National Gallery of Canada recently and was so engrossed in it that I even forgot to note its name or that of its creator. (any help would be much appreciated!)
Also, HELLO!
What do you think about this piece? Tell me all about it in the comment section below!
Have you ever felt like you were simply running a race to nowhere? Have you ever felt stuck or without purpose? How did you cope? I would love to hear your stories; the comment section is waiting!
Nice!
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Saania! Thanks💕
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My pleasure! ❤️
Lots of love
Xx
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Reblogged this on Hamed M. Dehongi.
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Thank you!
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Welcome. I enjoyed reading it.
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Wow, This is awesome.
Thanks for sharing.
❤
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Wow, this was wonderful!
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Thank you, Riya! Means a lot💕
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Lovely stuff Shreya
Loved it !!
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Thank you, Nirant!🌸
Always a joy to hear from you
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My absolute pleasure, Shreya
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Beautiful piece with the most perfect finale.
Coping with life isn’t easy, but one must have faith things will get better. And we need to strive for it. I have always been a doer. Don’t want to sound cold, if a person doesn’t like his/her current situation, they need to change it.
Again, enjoyed their poem.
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Thank you for this wonderful comment! And yes, I agree with you. I too believe that we must strive for change if we want it. Also that we have the power to define our life the way we want. It isn’t always easy, but it isn’t always impossible either🌸
Thank you!
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Very true.
My pleasure.
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I felt this magical piece coursing through my veins. Read it twice so it could resonate. Your words are wonderfully penned! 😊💜
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You have given my words so much love by reading them twice!
Thank you, Kelsey. You’re amazing🌸
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oh.my.goodness. this is amazing!! well done! how do you right such amazing things??!🤭
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You are so kind!!!❤️❤️
Thank you✨
Also, could you please leave a link to your blog? I can’t access it by clicking on your name anymore🤷♀️
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Thank you, but it’s really amazing! Of course- http://girlonline.game.blog/2019/05/25/kindness-and-recognition/ that’s my latest post 🙂 – Girl Online xx
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Thank you!❤️
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check out my new blog http://lifewithnaomi.home.blog/2019/05/26/hello-world/
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please check out my new blog lifewithnaomi 🙂
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I surely will! 🌸
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Its such a nice piece of writing 💜
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Thank you, Sachin!
How’ve you been?
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I am good. I am busy with studies. I have my CA Final exams starting from tomorrow.
How have you been?
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That’s good.
I’m fine as well🙂
Good luck for the exams!
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Thanks
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Definitely relatable. Sometimes you run a race only to get there and have to wait for the next step. The key is living while you run or walk that race. Easier said than done though 😊
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I agree with you.
And yes, easier said than done! My idea is to keep hoping and keep working towards the goal🌸
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That’s the best approach to have. Take care 😊
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You too, Johnzelle🙂
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A race to nowhere it is!!
and this feeling of “isolation is convenience” is i relate to. This one was the best thing I have read today, Shreya 🙂
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That is the sweetest comment I’ve read all day! It is always a joy when people can relate to my work💕Thank you, Moushmi!
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Truly, as such. ‘living’ is ‘the life’. Just by undesiring to ‘reach’ towards an end and ‘preach’ throughout; might help create better opportunities to live and imbibe the ‘present’….
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That is true. What we can do is try to really live and have hope!❤️
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Enjoyed the flow 🌸😁
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Happy to hear that, Ekta!!💕
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Pleasure is mine 💖💖
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Very true! All of us are in this blind race of success, but once we achieve our goals, we set up new ones and disregard the idea of gratitude towards what we have! Lovely piece! 🙂
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Absolutely beautiful!❤️
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Awh, thank you Richa!💕
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