i look at this city from farther away
and see a million stars situated in place
i can’t see the humans or their malice, their deceitful ways
can’t see the compassionate hearts or the beauty they create
all i see is a collection of lights
and i adorn it with meaning, however i like
i wish this was us
far away, apart
so i could see you as i wanted
a picture painted by my mind,
a piece of art
Well written 💕
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♥️
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Beautifully written Shreya. It’s been a while!
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Thank you Zizy!
Yes it has, I started university here in Canada and am always short of time haha
How are you, and the family?
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Wow! I can imagine!!! Take your time dear, and all the best!
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Thank you!
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Shreya you rocked again 🤗
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Aah, thank you, love!💫
How’ve you been?
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I have been all good. How are you?
I can see you getting well with each post.
More power to you dear🤗
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I’m good too!
And that is so nice of you, oh my god!
Sending lots of love your way!✨💕
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Lovely friend 🙂
How you understood what I commented on Akshayas blog? You know to read Malayalam?
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Thanks!
And no, I don’t know Malayalam! I translated the text to English using my phone 🙂
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Lovely
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Thanks, sweetheart
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Beautiful one.
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Thank you!
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Nice poem Shreya
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Thank you, Kurian!
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You are welcome Shreya
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Feels heartfelt. I simply loved the last few lines. Gave it a whole new zing. Keep it up! 😊🙌
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Hey, this brought a smile on my face, thank you very much!🌸
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I missedm your wonderful poems, Shreya. This is great!
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You’re so sweet, Winnie!
Thank you🙂
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You’re welcome, Shreya! 😊
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If only…
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if only…..
On a side note, how’ve you been, man?
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Ah busier than a bee 😀 I am giving the bees a competition. How are things at your end?
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What a work of art your poetry is! 🌹
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That’s very gracious of you!
Thank you!🌸
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Beautifully written
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Thank you, Nidhi!
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Well written!!!
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Thank you🌸
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And that, Shreya, was a beautiful piece of art. Well done!
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That is so nice of you, Shweta!
Thank you!
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Love
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🙂🌸
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